The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/13
Beautiful devotional!
God bless~
I think you handled covering the topic in a few different ways in this interesting mini-sermon. I enjoyed your different definitions and your subtle sense of humor relaxes the reader, allowing her to let down her guards.

There have been several stories this week about Jesus being the key that we need so it's important to tell your story in a way that will stand out from the others.

You did a nice job of backing up your message with references from the Bible. Make sure you include the translation that you used. I think your words will touch many hearts and allow God to enter those hearts and seal the deal. You have a passion of using your words to reach out to others and it really shows in this piece. I think you did a well-written and compelling job. Keep writing!
02/28/13
Yes, oh yes, Jesus! I invite Jesus to enter every area of my life. From basic French class I remember, "Entre vous!" I suggest you break things up a bit with paragraphs...Thank you for this inspiring Bible study article.

Wing His Words