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02/21/13
This is a lovely devotion. I think you did a great job of coming up with the 8 R's. They are important to remember and a vital part of our relationship with Christ. The only thing I might suggest would be in the beginning, instead of using the universal you, make it more personal and tell it from the first person. When you did your list of things to pray for, I found it more powerful and touching when you use the word I instead of you. I was able to relate to the author and really feel a sense of a connection. This is a powerful read and I believe it will touch many hearts.
02/22/13
Beautiful job with this entry and the topic. Nicely done with wonderful messages throughout. God bless~
02/23/13
Wow you have a true gift in bringing out the word in your writing, Keep up the good work!
02/26/13
A powerful article that is so well thought out. I am sure God would not ignore such a prayer and to recognize that it is being answered is a testament to your faith. We can all learn from this inspiring message.
02/28/13
Congratulations for ranking 11th in level one!