The Official Writing Challenge
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I think this is a lovely devotion. You did a splendid job in the beginning of telling a true life story that pretty much anyone can relate to. I might suggest that instead of the last sentence, you end with a prayer instead. That way people who don't know how to pray will have a perfect example in front of them. I also thought the scriptures that you chose were a perfect match for your message. Good job.
02/22/13
Oh how I loved this sweet and authentic message. Your little girl pulled me into her heart as probably everyone else who reads this.
Great job. God bless~
02/24/13
This is awesome. Im looking forward to reading more of your work.
"Out of the mouth of babes and sucklings" I cannot remember where in the Bible this quotes comes from but I did think of it when your daughter said she would like a key to lock Jesus in her heart. Sometimes our children say the profoundest things and your using this as the 'key' to your article tells us how much your daughter's statement impacted you, as it did the readers of your story. A job well done in writing this article.
Congratulations on placing second in your level and for ranking 30 overall! The highest rankings can be found on the message boards for the top 8 to 15 in each level and the top 35 overall. (Depending on number of entries.)
02/28/13
Congrats. God Bless~
02/28/13
Thank you for sharing the moment. It was simple, but "beautiful" to read!
Congratulations on your placing second at level one. Write on!