The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah this is a sweet piece, I thought of the ways to ensure her love for him came through loud and clear. I think you did a great job and really got your message across in a clear and affirming way. Great writing.
02/18/13
This was a heartwarming and touching story. You could tell the love that your family has for one another.

The whole room lit up with birthday cheer for your husband's 30th birthday. I bet they enjoyed themselves also.
That will teach your husband a lesson for being gone for special celebrations.

This was a well written story. It will be a cherished memory for years to come.
Congratulations for placing 13th in your level!