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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Note (02/07/13)

TITLE: Sealed and Delivered
By Rita Minner
02/13/13


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Sealed and Delivered



A noteworthy note must
clearly be noted.
It’s one that’s read.
It calms the heart.
It fills the soul,
relieving dread.
Rejoices in births,
sympathizes in death,
encourages dreams,
consoles the hurt.
.

A noteworthy note,
cherished for years,
tucked away gladly,
preserved through the years.
A warm-memoried note,
long forgotten,
revisited,
Refreshes!


A note-worthy Note
Sent in love,
Sealed by blood,
Delivered with care,
Ever unchanged,
Unyielding,
Uplifting,
Tenaciously offering,
A life free from chains.

A note-worthy Note,
Beyond death’s corruption,
Eternally forged,
Ne’r forgotten
Words of Life
Full of love
Filled with joy.



A note-worthy NOTE
Offers life, offers grace,
for searching souls
Whomever were told,
‘There’s no hope!’
‘There’s no help!”
‘No relief from your dread!’
‘You’re condemned!’
‘You’re betrayed!’
‘You’re alone!’
‘Be ashamed’!


But a note-worthy note
Offers life evermore,
Freedom from fear,
Strength for each day,
No more dread,
No regrets,
Death is swallowed up whole.
Victory,
Sweet Victory,
is yours
from this time forth
And ever more.

“But thanks be to God, who gives us the victory through our Lord Jesus Christ.
I Corinthians 15:57 NKJV


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Loni Bowden-Horn02/17/13
This piece really spoke to me about what a note should contain.

I might not have began with "a noteworthy note needs to be noted" because the message seems duplicated.

I really enjoyed your poem overall. Keep writing.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/17/13
This is quite lovely. You really have a way with arranging your words. At times I felt like I was reading what Dr Seuss might have written on this topic. You did a fine job.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/17/13
As I read over my comment I realized it could me taken in many ways. I meant it with the utmost respect. His rhythm was divine and I believe he was nothing short of genius so my comment meant your work was also brilliant. :-)
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/21/13
Congratulations for placing 14th in your level!