The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. I think it was genius to show the similarity between being a good pianist and a good Christian.

I did notice you started in present tense then flipped to past and back again to present.

I think the making of a good devotion is to start with a true life lesson that most people can relate to. You did just that and your transition I to the biblical message was seamless. This is an extraordinary piece.
02/20/13
Good advice. I like your analogy.