The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written and so, so touching. The symbolisms were well done. Kudos!
An effective allegory (for last weeks' topic, I think). Very nice imagery, almost like a legend. Watch the spelling of there / their. I like your writing style.
This is beautiful. I am not generally a huge fan of inanimate objects talking and singing...but in this case it works very well. I particularly loved the way the flowers cushioned his fall.