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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Note (02/07/13)

TITLE: Perfect Note
By Patrick Champion
02/10/13


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You know as Christians we are expected by the world not to mess up at all. That's not correct though my worldly friends. We are as human as you guys are and we make as many mistakes and goof- ups as someone who doesn't know Christ. As someone who loves singing for the Lord, I will compare us Christians to a song or hymn. A song or hymn is made up of many notes that come together and create a masterpiece!!As Christians we should each pray and seek the will of God every day in everything that we do, especially in our decision making. If we encounter a coworker who is having a bad day, or a family member or friend that needs some financial help or just an ear to listen to a problem they are having, or Heaven forbid someone who has some questions about where they are going to spend their ETERNITY. We should PRAY and ask the Holy Spirit to guide our words and thoughts and the ears, mind and heart of the person that we are talking or listening to in these situations. Christians we are the NOTES on this page or pages of this MASTERPIECE that God has created that we call LIFE. Each one of us are His perfect note for whatever song (problem)we are coming into each day of our lives.


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Emily Gillilan02/15/13
I like the commentary about not having to be perfect. Christians forget that sometimes I think. It is hard to know how to represent Christ, a perfect person, while at the same time being so so imperfect ourselves. The love He gives and moves through us is perfect, and outshines our imperfections. Thank you for writing.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/17/13
This is a nice mini sermon. You make some great points and give the reader something to think about.

A piece like this can easily feel like a lecture to some people. A good way to fix this would be to change the voice from talking directly to the reader about what they should do would be to show how something impacted your life and share that.

I think this is a great analogy. I like the idea of each person being a note. Alone that note may sound a bit harsh but by blending them together it is like harmonizing with God. Lovely bit of writing,
CD Swanson 02/19/13
Beautifully said and written. I enjoyed this. Thank you. God bless~