The Official Writing Challenge
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Haunting reminder that we are blessed in the USA to be able to worship Jesus without restraint. Thanks for this piece.
11/08/05
Very, very good.
11/09/05
wow, Makes me grateful for the religious freedom we have. Thanks for the reminder. God bless. djdeb
Very well written! I, too, am reminded to be thankful for everyday freedoms. Thank you.
11/09/05
One of my favorite hymns (and the story behind it). Very well written piece!
11/09/05
Beautiful song and nice words. It's an inspiration. We can get through any tough time with him.
11/09/05
A good reminder to not take our privilege of worshiping God lightly. Great story!
I liked how you wrote this to the reader, made for a nice change of pace. I really liked the line about seeing the pastor for the first time covered in blood.
11/12/05
Hard to write a story that keeps our attention when your readers will most likely know where you are going with it. But you did it through your Point of View character. Well done. If you do rewrite this/enlarge it think about: would your character apologize for her singing? Yeggy
Inspiring and well told story! You've chosen the perfect hymn for this one. Well done!
Ugh... the neighbor in that story makes me sick! It hits so close to home, though, because (sadly enough) I know people who would turn on a person like that... I don't really want to think about a person doing that, but yeah...

Really good story (btw).