The Official Writing Challenge
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An enjoyable story of truth and significance...and ultimately the MC finds God and his place. Nicely done.

God bless
This was a delightful read. I like the parent's attitude. Many kids in the US are used to getting what they want without working for it. I also liked the line that we are God's employees. This was a nice take on the topic.