The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely presented and beautifully written.

God bless~
Very well written and researched.

It tells the symbol of the staff of facts that are seldom known.

I really like your opening paragraph and how it ties in with the rest.

I think you did a lively job with this passionate poem. I especially liked the last part about man's splintered strength. How true it is if we didn't have Jesus holding us, our strength will splinter and cause us to crumble to the ground, while asking Jesus to hold us up makes our strength immeasurably stronger.
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