The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/13
Beautiful job...I enjoyed this lovely read.

Niely done. God bless~
This is a great devotion. I love how you started off with an example that most people can understand. Your transition to the Biblical message was smooth and your message powerful. You made some great points that makes the reader stop and think without coming off as too preachy, which isn't easy to do at all.
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