The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/13
I can hear the music to this lovely poem. Beautifully done. God bless~
02/08/13
What a lyrical and fitting poem. I couldn't think of a way to use a musical staff in a poem or story, but you've done a wonderful job.
02/11/13
This is such a creative and unique poem. I love how it all flows so naturally. I am not musical at all, but you were still able to help me understand, while, I suspect, still thrilling those who are familiar with music. You nailed the topic and this is a beautiful allegory that shows how each part of the body, or of the Church all need to do the job assigned by God to be able to make beautiful music together. I want to leave you my highest compliment--WOW!
02/12/13
Nice thoughts and nicely written.

Wing His Words!
02/13/13
This demonstrates how if we all use our gifts and talents that God gave us, we make up a beautiful melody.

We humans like to look at our flaws but God looks at the music of the heart.

Well-written piece. Thanks for an uplifting song.
02/14/13
Congratulations on your honorable mention! I really thought this would be in the top 3.