The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/13
Great job with this entry. I loved the ending and the metaphorical biblical reference. WOnderful writing. Nicely done.

God bless~
This is a creative and delightful POV. I was a tad confused at exactly who the MC was, but I think it was the shadow's created by the boy and his staff. I found this POV fascinating and an interesting read. The allegory between the sun and the shadow was quite clever too. Nice job.
Congratulations on ranking 12th in level one!