The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really lovely. It has this great sense of depth. I think the analogy is awesome.
02/02/13
I loved the title and the pulsing rhythm of your poem.
02/02/13
Epic in its meaning and lovely in its flow.
God bless~
02/07/13
I have always liked light houses but this poem provides even a deeper experience that I will carry with me. Thank you.
Congratulations on your ribbon and for ranking 34 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
02/10/13
Congrats on your accomplishment!