The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
Beautiful poem. It had a good rhyme scheme. I think a few of the lines were a little wordy and the word rode should be road, but overall I really enjoyed it.
01/26/13
Lovely poem with great content and meaning.

God bless~
I really enjoyed this sweet poem. It spoke right to my heart and filled me with emotions.I noticed a couple of tiny errors for example rode instead of Road. You did a great job of writing on topic. Even though you only mentioned the word once at the end there is no doubt that your story was about the need for rest. Beautiful bit of writing.