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01/24/13
It is important to listen to the Holy Spirit's urging. This piece had a kind of lyrical quality to it.
01/26/13
Beautiful and engaging piece...It offers peace to the reader.

I especially loved the ending. Beautiful job.

God Bless~
I really enjoyed the story. I could relate to the MC because I have been in the hospital many times. It's wonderful how God can use our troubled times to bring glory to His name. Your story showed just that while still covering the topic. Good job.