The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/13
Timeless message.

Good job with the topic.

God bless~
01/26/13
I can feel your passion and the truth of this entry. Thank you for sharing your story here!
This is a great devotion. You did a nice job of telling a true story to start out with that people can relate to.

I did notice some tiny errors that can be fixed easily buy a good proofreader like the punctuation goes inside the quotation marks and once you had to instead of too.

Overall I think you did a great job. You did some nice showing in the beginning that helps the reader paint a picture in her mind. Your Bible verse was a perfect fit. Good job.
01/28/13
Oh, beautiful, so beautiful. A great reminder of God's gentleness with His children. Loved your story, and I know a lot of people in ministry who have felt just like your MC. Thanks for writing this.
01/31/13
Congrats. God bless~