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01/18/13
What a beautiful poem. I can relate to the MC so well. I lost my brother in a car accident when he was 17.
There is such a sense of pain in these words that it is almost palpable.My mom has been gone for 19 years and I still miss her like crazy. You packed a lot of emotion in this poem.
I hesitate to say anything. It's like treading in a secret garden. I just want to sit in the quiet of the thoughts and pictures and drink in the sacred. Thank you.
01/22/13
The anguish and pain is clearly defined in every word...this was touching and beautiful.

God bless~