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01/18/13
This is an interesting take on the topic. I think you did a nice job of retelling this familiar Bible story.
01/21/13
A nice way of re-telling the rejection of Jacob's first wife. I found it amusing picturing tea-cups in those days. A well written piece!

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Colin (Gold Membership)
01/22/13
You did a nice job with this Bibilical piece.

God bless~
01/23/13
It's not often anyone points much sympathy Leah's way - after all her father did cheat poor Jacob. However, you made her real. My heart ached for her. Well done.