The Official Writing Challenge
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This piece totally rocks--that's a good thing. You grabbed my attention immediately and held it throughout the story. I think your take on the topic is creative and fresh.

I stumbled just a not over one sentence....as realization that a bond has been made hits. I think if you had just switched it around like this: as realization hits that a bond has been made.
it might have flowed better.

But even with that tiny red ink, I still think you did a marvelous job on this. It really touched my heart. I found myself nodding my head in agreement as I read. Fabulous bit of writing.
There is much wisdom in this piece - thank you! I especially like the line, "How time is spent can become the measure of a man..." Well done.
I enjoyed reading this piece. Beautiful writing.
01/20/13
Very good article. Yes, God's love cannot be measured. Each day we can know a little more of just how much He does care. Blessings!
01/22/13
Nicely done with a nice message. God bless~
01/23/13
That is one thing we can't measure--God's infinite love.