The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a really good poem with a great message!
This is really good. I thought the words just flowed off the page. The rhymes were great too. You also did a nice job of weaving the topic throughout this delightful poem.
01/20/13
Very nice!
01/21/13
This is a good poem and well on topic. I liked your examples of different types of measures, but especially the contrast with the measure of "Truth". The end could be just a bit stronger, but overall it is wonderful.
01/21/13
Excellent rhyming here. Great job counting the syllables and coming up with a variety of measures which fit the theme nicely. Good point as well.
01/22/13
Really like this poem. Moving and touching.
God bless~
01/23/13
Excellent use of the topic in your poem. Good use of rhyme and rhythm. I agree that last stanza could be strengthened because it doesn't flow as well as the others.