The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow you say so much with such few words. This piece tugged at my heart. I could feel the pain of the MC and wanted to crawl on the ground to help her search. The father's love and forgiveness speaks volumes. This is truly a wonderful piece. it's right on topic, yet still fresh and one of a kind. I enjoyed every word.
01/11/13
I agree...you expressed a lot in just a few words. Short but sweet. A stone doesn't value much but when it is given with love attached, it is priceless.
01/11/13
P.S. I did want to encourage your to leave a line between paragraphs because it helps the reader with the flow of the story. Again, sweet little piece.
01/11/13
A treasure is truly in the eye of the beholder. I am very sentimental like the MC in the story.
01/14/13
This was intense! Spectacular and creative way of presenting the topic. Nice job. God Bless~
Congratulations on ranking 6 the in level one. This was on of my favorites. You can see the highest rankings on the message boards usually sometime Thursday evening or Friday.