The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/13
Great job of portraying the sadness and loneliness. Would love to see this developed to her victory. Keep writing!
Wow this is a powerful story. You really surprised me with the ending and that doesn't happen often. I'm sure there will be people who want the MC to live happily-ever-after but that doesn't always happen. You did a great job of showing how hanging on to grudges can really destroy one's life. I also think you did a grand job of pulling the topic into the story. I saw flat in more than one way and I enjoy that when the writer can pull it off and you pulled it off; great job!
01/14/13
This was certainly a prolific tale that packed a powerful message in between the lines. Excellent piece.
God Bless~
01/16/13
The MC has deep emotions and a sensitive nature. The ending took me by surprise, but real life does too.