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01/10/13
Nice job. Your poem has a definite beginning, middle and end. You pull the reader along to a satisfying conclusion. Good treatment of the topic. Some of the rhythm is awkward, but overall a wonderful job. Keep writing!
01/11/13
I'm not huge fan of poetry, but I liked this one. I agree that the rhythms were a bit awkward, but the message was well communicated and I really like the line "her joy underneath."
This is beautiful. It reminds me of the poems I often write that may start out a tad dark but then God brings in the light. Your words just flowed off the page and your rhymes were a delight. I totally enjoyed this delightful poem.
01/14/13
The prolific ending says it all! Great job. God bless~
01/14/13
I really thought this poem expressed depth of feeling. Although the rhyme was off slightly in spots, I really liked it.
01/15/13
Deep, moving, and profound. Well done.