The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/13
Lovely! Since we only have 750 words to work with, I would condense the beautiful sunrise descriptions (and you did a good job with that) so that you will have more time to develop the rest of the story. Great job and keep writing!
01/11/13
Yes, God's timing. He certainly sent a sign - a flat tyre. I think it is good to leave the story there and let the reader imagine the rest. Fine writing.
I really enjoyed this story. Even though the ending was a bit predictable I found myself leaning into the computer screen. Then at the end. I sat up straight and had a huge smile plastered on my face. I didn't realize just how much I had been rooting for the MC to find true love. I can totally relate to being hurt and not being able to trust men again. You did a nice job with this piece. (And I'm not a big romance reader so that is truly a big compliment. :)
01/14/13
Love entries such as yours. The entire entry was a delight to read, and I smiled really wide at the conclusion! God Bless~