The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/13
Good devotional material. Add spaces between paragraphs for easier reading. Great job, and keep writing!
01/10/13
You've given us some good food to chew on for awhile. I would like to make one suggestion...if you could throw in a personal ancedote from your own life that would really help to draw your readers into your devotional. Thanks for sharing...I enjoyed reading it.
This is an interesting devotional. You get right to your point. I did notice a couple of tiny typos like forgetting the ' in God's Word. I'd enjoy reading even more of your personal story in this piece. One thing you can do is share a time when you didn't heed God's words and how the promises in the Bible made a difference in your life. You covered the topic and brought up some interesting points. Good job.
01/14/13
Althought short on words, powerful in meaning and message conveyed in this lovely entry. God bless~