The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/12
Good advice as you presented the topic at hand. Nicely done. God bless~
You make some good points in this poem. It's true that some people are just players.

Some of your rhymes felt forced or were the same word instead of a rhyme. There's nothing wrong with that but sometimes consistency can help the flow. I noticed some lines had just a few syllables while others had double or triple.

You definitely make some great points in this piece and some thought provoking lines. Good job.