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Beautiful job...nicely done. This touched my heart.
God bless~
This is a fascinating juxtaposition of the two familiar Bible stories. I really liked the way you emphasized that the rich man chose to walk away. I think some people miss the importance of the choice and you did an outstanding job of bringing that message out. Also I think one of the most often misquoted verses in the Bible is the one about the love of all money. I think you did a nice job of pointing out the difference between money and the love of money.
Congratulations! This was so beautiful. God bless~
Congrats for your 2nd place win. Write more to win more and to move higher.