The Official Writing Challenge
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I am always amazed at how time progresses. It is steady, but yet can seem to speed by at times, while at others it is painfully slow.
Very creative poem on topic. The flow was bumpy in places and some of the lines were hard for me to make sense of, but some were wonderful. My favorite was this one:

Mr. Time can be elusive, too.
For you can't keep him with you.
If you hold him, he evaporates,
At unusual and unexpected rates.

Love that! Keep writing!
This is lovely. There have been lots of time poems this week yet each one is different and unique in its own way. You did a nice job with some of those rhymes. It isn't always an easy thing to do. You also have many nice messages sprinkled throughout this piece. Good job.
Wonderful job with this moving poem. Great flow and message throughout the entire piece. Thank you.
God bless~