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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Time (11/15/12)

TITLE: It's Time
By Connie K Cameron
11/15/12


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I know the time
Is almost here
When all re-born
Will disappear
Into the Heavens
We will meet
With Jesus Christ;
Good news complete

Quakes round the world
Are the signs
Of birth pains for
A dire time
Storms that devastate
Good lives
Will kill, destroy
And divide

Seas uproar
Mountains abate
God only, knows
Our coming fate
Sickness, pests are
Running wild
Can be acute
Can be mild

Infants born
To evil men
Surrounded by all kinds
Of sin
Growing up uncertain
Measure
But for us
Heaven stores treasure

The book is open
God will proclaim
The names he's stored
The burning flame
The Trinity
The coming wrath
The death the life
The narrow path

We are the Christians
We behold
We did the things
that we were told
Lift up your prayers
Down on your knees
Open heart and eyes
And you will see


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Christina Banks 11/22/12
I'm looking forward to that time myself. Even so Lord, come quickly.
Randy Foncree11/22/12
I loved this poem...some of it is kind of sobering because I believe to time of Christs' coming is very near. Thanks for sharing this...God bless you in your writing...
Lynda Lee Schab 11/23/12
Wonderful...great rhythm, flow, and message. You definitely have a gift for poetry. Well done!
Meghan Andersch 11/23/12
Thank you for this reminder that time is drawing to an end. I appreciated your communication of the hope we have in Christ, even in the midst of disaster and affliction. Also, the rhythm and flow of your poem were very good.
Olawale Ogunsola11/24/12
A great reminder. This is a good job. Thanks for sharing.
Bryan Rudolph11/24/12
The content is stilted, unfocused, and yet, with certain lines - made movingly memorable: all will disappear; infants born to evil men; the coming wrath, the narrow path. Oh, yes, I look forward to your next entry.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/24/12
This is a lovely piece. You speak the truth in a way that rolls right off the tongue. There have been many poems this week that have a similar message but then it is a message that bears repeating for sure!
Camille (C D) Swanson 11/27/12
Very well done and said. I enjoyed this so much. Thanks.
God BLess~
Myrna Noyes11/29/12
Very nice poem containing an important message! My favorite stanza was this:

"The book is open
God will proclaim
The names he's stored
The burning flame
The Trinity
The coming wrath
The death the life
The narrow path"

You ending was good, too!

CONGRATULATIONS on your level win! WAY TO WRITE!! :)