The Official Writing Challenge
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This is quite an engaging story. Also, it is rather difficult to read without a space between paragraphs.
11/15/12
Cute and entertaining.
Short and meaninful. God endures ours, we must endure others' irritation.
You have a delightful sense of humor. You had me chuckling out loud in several places. The only thing I might have suggested would have been to start off with your second paragraph. The first line in it is funnier and made me want to keep reading. You covered the topic in a funny way and still delivered an important message. Nice job.
11/19/12
This is very similar to my entry...very lighthearted tone...enjoyed the read...God bless and thanks for sharing...
11/20/12
This is a fun article. Husbands are grand aren't they? Good thing none of us are perfect, otherwise what would we have to talk about?