The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/12
Amusing read...thanks for sharing...
This is a delightful poem. It painted some vivid pictures for me and I could easily picture myself as the MC. I enjoyed your rhyming and the words flowed effortlessly.
11/14/12
Cute poem, and I loved your title! :) Your rhythm and flow was good throughout. I know many women can empathize with your MC's weight and clothing struggles, and I appreciated the positive ending!
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level one!