The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is beautiful. I'm not a musically talented person by any means but I could easily see this in a song. You might need to add a chorus but it read like beautiful music to my ears. I could also see it on a greeting card or more likely a plaque. It left me with a warm feeling and I enjoyed every word.
11/14/12
Very nice. Beautiful imagery.
11/14/12
This poem had a nice rhythm, and I appreciated the joyful message it contained. Good job! :)
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!