The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute poem. I felt like I was talking to you face to face. The pace was just right. Tiny bit of red ink--you repeated now twice in one line. I might've left the second one off or subbed another word. You covered the topic in a fun and interesting way. Good job.
11/10/12
Love the ending...God bless and thanks for sharing...
Loved your article! With children it is alway a job to get them the right things that money provides for, and not the things they want.
11/13/12
We had a similar experience with our children. Now even a granddaughter likes thrift stores.
11/14/12
Nice poem that is definitely on topic! You did a good job in presenting the dilemma of many parents and their children concerning clothes.