The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a powerful synopsis of the end of Jesus' life. The last paragraph was a great ending, leaving the reader with a sense of hope and comfort.
11/10/12
I like the progression of this...keep honing your writing skill...God bless you...
11/13/12
You have some good thoughts here. Jesus did wear earthly clothes but is now wearing heavenly ones which we will when we join Him.
11/14/12
I enjoyed reading how Jesus was clothed, both spiritually and physically, as He went through His life journey on this earth. Thank you for sharing your thoughts! The last lines were very inspiring!
11/15/12
CONGRATULATIONS on your third place level win!! WAY TO WRITE!! :D