The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/12
I find your comparison quite brilliant. I love your thoughts concerning where you choose to park your heart and mind. Your Shakespearean first line grabbed me (and made me smile).
I enjoyed this piece and its unique formatting. You made some great points and definitely leave the reader with something to think about.
11/04/12
This was very good! I liked your interchanging essay and poetry formatting and what a great message about parking our hearts in wisdom. You won't be at beginner level for long...you have real talent.
Very clever piece! I particularly enjoyed the poetry and the message about staying close to the Lord.