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This is a lovely dream. I have no doubt that God uses our dreams to speak to us. I think it is because it's one of the few times we let down our guard enough to hear his words. The part about the brittle bridge made me pause as I have had a reoccurring dream of being trapped on a bridge since I was little. Maybe God was trying to get through to me too. I remember the first time I ever saw a picture of the George Washington Bridge. I wasn't very old, maybe fourth grade but it was the exact bridge that has been in my dreams. Still to this day, I have a fear of bridges. Maybe I need to grasp God's hand and conquer my fears. :)
11/04/12
I LOVED this story. You made everything come to life where I could see your MC walking in the park with Jesus and then I also experienced her fear and the hard time she had letting go of it. The ending was perfect. Great work.

God bless!