The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this well-written story. I would say it was one of the top five this week. Kudos!
11/07/05
It was as if I was watching the scene so clearly. It flowed together beautifully! :)
11/07/05
Absolutely beautiful.
11/08/05
Oh this touched me! I felt so sad for him but then you pulled me through to hope. I agree about the visuals..very good!!
It is beautiful. Congratulations on your win!