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You have a great sense of drama, and there is a strong message at the close. Well done.
This is an interesting story. I could feel the suspense building as the drugs were discovered. I like how you introduced a couple of conflicts to keep the suspense building from beginning to end.

You had a few passive sentences like: She got her left hand fractured.
Just by switching it around it becomes an active one: She fractured her left hand. Then if you wanted to paint even more of a picture you could go on and add other details such as She winced as the pain shot up her arm while the pain in her heart also intensified with each passing second.

I think you have a great idea for a longer story as this one did seem to be hampered just a bit by the word count. However, I could easily see these characters and this setting as a great start for a romance novel. Keep writing you've done a good job.