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10/25/12
The mention of coffee in the cup reminds me so much of when I was a little girl watching my grandmother and mother drink their coffee every morning. Thanks for bringing back those memories :).

God bless!
10/25/12
Oh - I loved this story short on words, but endless in meaning! God bless~
This is a super sweet piece on how traditions get passed down and how things can bring back important memories.

You had some tiny errors like Mom should be capitalized when used as a name (without a modifier in front like my or her)than instead of then. A challenge buddy could help you with these little details, if you need help finding one, feel free to PM.

You covered the topic and told a short but sweet story. I'd love to hear more like the troubles or talks that the MC or the brother had or how Mom reacted to the news. This is a good thing because it means you piqued my curiosity. Keep writing those stories! Good job.