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Topic: Cup - 10-25-12 Deadline (10/18/12)
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TITLE: Memories | Previous Challenge Entry
By Barbara Wasserman
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Joseph and mom had many important talks when he was growing up as did I. Most of those times the pale blue cup and saucer sat in front of mom, the cup filled with coffee.
It was many years later Joseph told mom he bought the cup and saucer at an estate sale.It was than,mom told him she drank hot tea in a cup just like it when she was a young girl lining in England.
The cup and saucer is on the table waiting for fresh brewed coffee to be poured into it,as I tell mom she is going to be a grandmother.
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You had some tiny errors like Mom should be capitalized when used as a name (without a modifier in front like my or her)than instead of then. A challenge buddy could help you with these little details, if you need help finding one, feel free to PM.
You covered the topic and told a short but sweet story. I'd love to hear more like the troubles or talks that the MC or the brother had or how Mom reacted to the news. This is a good thing because it means you piqued my curiosity. Keep writing those stories! Good job.