The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Great writing. And yes, it is a very strengthening poem indeed; one that reminds us of all Jesus did for us and how we are to obey the Father's will just as he did.

God bless!
10/25/12
Amen...and Amen. Beautiful job with this poem.

God bless~
This is a powerful piece. You do a nice job of having the words flow of the page. many stories this week have been about the cup of Jesus. I liked how you took a slightly different POV and brought the past, present and future people alive in Jesus' heart and mind. This is a great bit of writing.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!