The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
Very nice poem and a treat to read. May God bless you today and always.
10/25/12
Beautifully written. Lovely poem. Thank you...God bless~
10/26/12
Great message in this poem! It flowed pretty well, and I especially liked the last stanza! Good way to end it! :) God bless you in your writing!
This is a lovely piece. You did a nice job with the rhymes and I enjoyed it all.

There have been many stories and poems this week about Jesus' cup. Someone once told me when I hear the topic to write down the first 3 to 5 ideas that pop in my head and then throw them away as it is likely to be what many others think of too. If you do stick with one of the first ideas try to come up with an original POV.

I really did enjoy this, though. It's a message that does bear repeating and it left a warm feeling in my heart. Keep writing the messages that Jesus lays on your heart. Good job.
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level one!