The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
I LOVED this, and it just so happened that I needed to read it today. That one cup... made me smile. Keep writing.

God bless!
10/25/12
Wow - what a creative story with a powerful message captured in so few words. Epic! God Bless~
I like your take on the familiar Bible story. You did a nice job of compacting it into an infomercial.

You did have some run-on sentences and other tiny errors that a good proofreader would help you catch. If you need help finding someone send me a PM.

I think your approach to the topic was quite clever. Your message was short but right to the point. Good job.