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Topic: Cup - 10-25-12 Deadline (10/18/12)
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Through the years of neglect, rejection, loneliness, and abandonment the most toughest of all stains is depression and unforgivness. But this is an all purpose most powerful detergent today.
With one cup not only will it leave you feeling refreshed in spirit but glowing and full of joy. Happiness will shine through you,you will be a breath of fresh air.
With only one cup it is capable of removing even the lightest, medium and heavy loads,we carry.
Burdens such as anger, pride, malice, greed, sloth, gluttony and even lust. It even tackles the bitterness and nothing is more powerful to even get through the most difficult hate stain of all.
This one cup of detergent has tiny crystals that loosen the holy spirit to soften cleans and purify the heart. Allowing you to be more gentle and to shine, to feel more confident about yourself and looking your best beautiful bright, in radiant. Guaranteed, with just one cup.
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You did have some run-on sentences and other tiny errors that a good proofreader would help you catch. If you need help finding someone send me a PM.
I think your approach to the topic was quite clever. Your message was short but right to the point. Good job.