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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Cup - 10-25-12 Deadline (10/18/12)

TITLE: ALL PURPOSE
By clarissa aguilera
10/23/12


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One cup is all you need, this detergent is all powerful it has the power to remove all stains with just one cup it powers out even the toughest stain in the heart. Such as, sin that causes a black, dingy, film that grows in the heart which is sin build up turning the heart completely black.
Through the years of neglect, rejection, loneliness, and abandonment the most toughest of all stains is depression and unforgivness. But this is an all purpose most powerful detergent today.
With one cup not only will it leave you feeling refreshed in spirit but glowing and full of joy. Happiness will shine through you,you will be a breath of fresh air.
With only one cup it is capable of removing even the lightest, medium and heavy loads,we carry.
Burdens such as anger, pride, malice, greed, sloth, gluttony and even lust. It even tackles the bitterness and nothing is more powerful to even get through the most difficult hate stain of all.
This one cup of detergent has tiny crystals that loosen the holy spirit to soften cleans and purify the heart. Allowing you to be more gentle and to shine, to feel more confident about yourself and looking your best beautiful bright, in radiant. Guaranteed, with just one cup.


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Marie Hearty 10/25/12
I LOVED this, and it just so happened that I needed to read it today. That one cup... made me smile. Keep writing.

God bless!
Camille (C D) Swanson 10/25/12
Wow - what a creative story with a powerful message captured in so few words. Epic! God Bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 10/31/12
I like your take on the familiar Bible story. You did a nice job of compacting it into an infomercial.

You did have some run-on sentences and other tiny errors that a good proofreader would help you catch. If you need help finding someone send me a PM.

I think your approach to the topic was quite clever. Your message was short but right to the point. Good job.