The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
A very cute story. I loved how you made the grandfather shine through your dialogue and descriptions. I wish we could all have happy endings like this one.

God bless!
10/25/12
Awwww! Great job with this piece. It made my heart smile. Thanks. God bless~
10/29/12
This was a very creative, well-written take on the topic! Your dialogue and characterizations of Grandma and Grandpa were excellent. Great job! :)
I like this story. Great flow, a solid MC, and very well written. I enjoyed it.
This is such a sweet story. Your idea is so original and I really loved the characters.

The only red ink I have is near the bottom you wrote you're grandma and it should be your.

This was an absolute delight and an out of the box story. I truly enjoyed it all and it is a winner in my book.
11/03/12
Really great job at creating a fun sketch on topic. Congratulations on your winning entry!
A well deserved win. Congrats!