The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/12
You did very well with the descriptions of the characters. I was looking forward to finding out if the cup would be found and if anything would happen between the two love birds. Your story had the perfect of happy endings.

God bless!
10/25/12
Oh I enjoyed this so much, especially the conclusion. I love happy endings...Thanks for making me smile!

God bless~
10/26/12
What a sweet romance!! :) I really enjoyed your story and found it to be very well-written. The ending was just perfect in my opinion! Blessings on your writing!
This is an excellent story. You grabbed my attention immediately with your opening line. You did a fantastic job of showing instead of telling and painted many pictures for me throughout. I'm not usually a big romance fancier but this story had even me ahhing. The end was perfect and brought the story full circle.