The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/05
Beautiful writing! I saw a little bit of myself in each of the sons and hoped that I would be more like the youngest. On a matter of format - try to leave a line between paragraphs to make it easier on the eye to read. Bunched text is often off-putting to read.
02/12/05
Very creative illustration of the different responses of people's hearts to God's request for obedience. paragraphs would make it read easier. Thanks for sharing. God bless,