The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/12
This piece was filled with gripping emotion and spiritual insight. It ended profoundly and fit the topic beautifully.
The only advice I might offer is to put a space between each thought-filled verse--this gives the reader time to ponder those specific words.
Great piece of work. Look forward to reading more of your entries.
10/19/12
WoW...this touched me on so many levels, your deep soul comes through with clarity...I loved this.

God Bless
10/19/12
WoW...this touched me on so many levels, your deep soul comes through with clarity...I loved this.

God Bless
Wow! You say so much in so few words. This piece really gripped my heart. I could relate in some ways as I have been tormented by illness. Also I'm reminded of how blessed I am by my kids. When I read the line mom was sick I thought about how I worried that my illness would negatively affect my kids but they are three of the most wonderful creatures on this planet. I am blessed and your poem touched me.
10/24/12
Powerful! Touching, and it gripped my heart.

God bless~