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What a cute and amusing family story - well done! and thanks!

Colin (Gold Member)
This is a really sweet story. It really tugs on my heart right now because my son just called from grad school his heart hurting because his girlfriend broke up with him. I wish I could make him pancakes and fix his hurt heart.

If you put double spaces between each paragraph it'll be easier for to read.

You covered the topic nicely and did so without using the topic word which sometimes even the most seasoned challenge writer has a hard time with.
Oh, how they grow up so fast! I really enjoyed your story. It certainly brought back memories of when my kids were little. Thanks for the memories!
Oh this tugs the heart strings! Memories of my son come flooding nice it would be to be called "Mommy" again...

Thanks so much...and great job!
Well done, adorable read. I enjoyed this. Thanks.

God bless~
This was beautiful - a real delight to read. Your descriptions were exquisite and yes, it was a blessing to follow this family scene. Thankyou
Congratulations for ranking 8 in level one!