The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/12
Thanks for sharing you meaningful and devotional poem. Well done!

Colin (Gold Member)
This is a delightful poem. I could feel the passion in your words. Some of the lines seemed a tad out of sync but I'm not great at meter. Perhaps reading it aloud might help. Your words touched my heart and I have no doubt that God has great things in store for you. You have blessed me with your words and I thank you for that. Nice job.
10/24/12
Beautifully said. Nice job with the topic with this poem. God bless~